Nice one there, Jermain!
Sounds very crisp and well balanced.
And 4 minutes, way to go ;) You're actually starting to make full-fledged songs.
But seriously, dude, the beginning was almost a copy of Chaoz Fantasy man xD
You could've tried and not make it so obvious you're making a second Chaoz Fantasy, but still, well done and congratulations on another song completed.
Hey nicedo!
Thanks alot for the rev. man!
So when will you start submitting new songs again?
It has been a looong long time XD
Thanks again! <3
Awesome
This is pure Hardstyle, man! Nice work!
I kindof missed a loud sub-bass though, maybe next time add a low sine to the kick so it'll have more impact (but don't overdo it please)
For the rest, very nice. The cymbals and hi-hat could use a little more high-frequencies, so just work on your EQ-ing skillz and it'll be even more awesome ;)
ok thanks for the tip, ill try to make a new release soon
Since you asked for it
Here are some constructive comments:
- The main melody is a tad too loud, might want to try and blend it in with the rest of the song instead of putting it on top ;)
- The entire song is being crushed to it's limits and beyond. Please, volume isn't everything. Everyone can pump their volume at home if they want to. It sounds like you compressed it too much, or it's just clipping and it's disguised very well, but lower the overall volume. This is just too much
- Try and use samples, instrumets and effects. Your music will sound way more original and less like it's just patterns jumbled together.
Peace
Thanks for your comment, i will keep that in mind
Digged it, really
Though it's not totally your own song, your lyrics are thought through and actually fit the song, so I won't deduct points for that. I did deduct some points for the following reason.
- Lyrics were a bit too loud in comparison with the music.
- Reverb over the lyrics was JUST a bit too much. This could also result from the lyrics being too loud (see point 1)
For the rest I totally digged it, good job.
This is so soothing
This is one heck of a song man. I'm digging it!
There is one thing I really get annoyed about.
at about 1:20 - 1:25 somewhere, a kick is just a bit off and at "...waaas the key" you pronounce 'the key' just a tad too early and it sounds like that part is a bit muddled together...
Only thing bothering me. A mistake that's small and probably just slipped by in the mixing phase. Only reason you get 9/10
5/5 though ;)
This is friggin awesome
I must say I REALLY enjoyed listening to this song. And I'm so proud you're from Holland as well ^ .^v HOLLAND REPRESENT!!!
But yeah, only thing I'd have to say kinda bugged me were the drums. The beat could've had a bit more EQ'ing I think or at least get a bit more reverb on it. IMHO the drums were JUST a bit to dry for the entire song... But again, just my 2 cents ;)
Keep it up and hope you'll check out my songs as well (When I start uploading stuff that's NEW and not ANCIENT and crappy ¬ .¬)
So yeah 10/10 and 5/5
NDC
DUDE, Your song is up!
Hey man, I still think it's awesome! Patch it up and replace this one ;)
Oh yeah, and the 9/10 is because it's not finished yet :P
Peace, NDC
Heheh, thanks, Fliks! Yes, I'll overcome my weak point and finish this song, and I'll get rid of that kick/bass clash. I forgot to correct the pitch, heheh ^^;
Later!
Dude, what can I say?
This brings back so many memories. I LOVE the guitars man, nice reverb and I totally feel DKC in there!
Drums could go with JUST a little bit less reverb though, get them more to the forground (sp?) of the song. Other than that, the strings complement the guitars nicely, but could be more spread out and just a LITTLE softer.
I wouldn't pan the guitars and piano so hard though. For the rest, just awesome revamp of an awesome song.
10/10 5/5
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